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Originally Posted by azoundria
Wondering if there's someone here who could help me out.
1) Will this work as a terms of service?
2) Are there any holes in it?
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Although it is very clear, I think some times legal terms are required just to make sure all the holes are plugged.
I would take your current list to a solicitor and get them to re-write it - they can do plain-english too.
Obviously, get quotes for the work but because you have already done the groundwork, the solicitors quotes should be lower.
Good Luck