KBVO site

[BIZAL]

Hi

Could you tell me what you think of the www.kbvo.co.uk site? Oh and please feel free to take up the free trial service.

[peterjhale]

Nice looking site

It took me a while to work out what you were offering

Is it a personal answering service?

You may want to put a headline like "hands free personal answering service"

Then a load of bullet points on the benefits you offer

I wouldnt put the price so large

Just get people to sign up for the free trial - a week is not enough - maybe 2 weeks ? or a month ?

[Ian J]

It has a nice look and feel about it but Peter hit the nail on the head when he suggested that the company's service isn't prominent enough.

A simple way to improve the home page might even be to just swap around the two sections so that "What we do" comes before the "Trial offer"

I don't think that the Partners page works in it's current state as the "blurb" is a bit meaningless and only one partner is listed and the explanation of what they do could do with being more concise.

A very small point on "About" page is that Kendlebell is a national company that offers not who offers

[inbakumar]

Bizal,

It is a simple but tidy site. I like it.

The top right hand side didn't register with me at all. It looked like a banner ad and I skipped it in the first instance (like many others, have developed a natural aversions to banners). I have to come back to it when I was trying to find out what they are offering. At present, it looks like the company is interested in getting the money first.

Moreover, the advertising tag line "the perfect answer" comes across as boasting. The grammar also needs looking into .

Good luck.

[peterjhale]

Is this your site Bizal or a client's ?

[BIZAL]

Hi

Its a clients site done by one of the companys in the group. So far it has had a v good response but things can always be better!!!

[davidhorn]

I agree with the comments above - I also skipped the top right offer, sensing it was a banner ad. Also, in Firefox, some of the padding seems off - after the first headline, the text beneath 'underlaps' it, if you know what I mean. It's clean and simple, but the one thing I need to see before I buy into any service was really buried: testimonials. I'd have these along the main navigation.

Also, in some places, clicking the link to 'packages' opens up a new window, which seemed odd.

Overall though, nice site,

David