Please provide feedback on my first website

[ozzrahog]

I am setting up a business and have set up my first ever website using microsoft small business.

I would welcome any feedback and pointers on how to improve it

Its at monumentparaplanning.com

Thanks

[ozzrahog]

I cant see an edit button but the web address should hav eread

monumentparaplanning.co.uk

[MJE]

looks ok to me

[georgewkw]

very weak. surfers will not spend more than 2 seconds on this. Best part is the image of the Parthenon.

[recycler]

The site kind of lacks a personality and is far too bland. I echo georgewkw's comments, it does not hold a visitor.

[PDC]

Agreed. It looks like its half way to being finsihed.

It needs a more professional header I think and the fonts and titles used in the page text jump from all in uppercase, to capitalised to small headers. It needs to be more uniform and maybe with an image or two to break tihngs up I'd say.