Revamped website

[liveonothers]

Hi guys, I have just revamped my website and hoping to get some pointers so perhaps I can imporve it further or taking notes for future development. My humble site;

http://www.liveonothers.com/

Thanks in advance!

Alex

[Jack Hackett]

I don't think this site does you any favours at at. I can't comment on the technical make-up of the site but to put it bluntly, the copy is absolutely terrible in terms of grammar, punctuation and syntax. It won't keep a visitor interested beyond the first paragraph I'm afraid.

My advice would be to hire a professional website content writer and let him/her start from scratch. If you leave the copy as it is, I doubt you'll ever receive a genuine enquiry regarding your services.

[liveonothers]

Thanks for the feedback Jack, will look into it and get somebody to fix my content. Appreciate that, cheers!

[pickaweb.co.uk]

I think it looks basic. A bit too grey.

[liveonothers]

Thanks Pickaweb, I got rid of the grey. You were right, it seems too dull with too much grey..