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Site Review - Loudaz.dancindaz.co.uk - 15-12-2004, 12:56 PM

Hello I am a newbie here.

Could you guys/gals please let me know what you think of my site. I am still playing with Ideas and typing a lot more content but please take the time to let me know what you think

http://loudaz.dancindaz.co.uk/index.php
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15-12-2004, 04:19 PM

It's hard to see what you're site will do - or the format it will take. Right now - it's a bunch of adverts. If you put your content on it, your ads may become more relevant in context ... I'd suggest you finish it and then post for review. Right now, it's kinda hard to see the point of the site. Sorry.

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15-12-2004, 04:53 PM

I agree with David - a strange site in a way

What is lodaz and why is it in the URL

You need a heading like - "Play 100s of games online now" if that's what the site is about

It's a bit lacking at the moment


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16-12-2004, 07:39 PM

Apart from being full of affiliate links (which can get you penalised by search engines) the tables are not well placed on the page and I need to scroll to the right to see the whole site which I find quite annoying.

I suggest you build it from scratch again, even if this sounds too disappointing.
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Right I have looked at it fresh - 28-12-2004, 10:23 PM

thanks for the feedback thus far.

the site is about games and music that Lou and Daz like hence LouDaz

i have updated it a hell of a lot and would like further thoughts

http://www.dancindaz.co.uk/loudaz/index.htm


let me know if its any better? I am still developing this idea and the site is not the normal address

cheers
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